i liked this! there was a distinct lack of kissing, but i'll just add that part in my mind ;-) hypothermia fic, man, i love it...just thinking about the warm snuggling makes me happy :-)
"Fucking *dumbass*," he whispered again, all the anger gone from his voice. "If you so much as get a paper cut around me again, I will murder you. Got it, Quinto?
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This was really good, you had me scared for Zach and unsure of where you were going to go with it, because that's where Chris was and he leads us into the story emotionally. Also, you made the hypothermia believable - that it wasn't too cold out or anything extreme, just one of those things that creeps up.
Finally - liked the image of Chris in a dark cocoon with Zach who is in his boxers O_o
Pinto popped my RPF cherry too! Except I headed straight for the slash :D
Haha, glad you enjoyed the creepy man-womb? XD I didn't really intend to scare you - if it had been death fic, I would have put a warning and wouldn't THAT have been a way to enter a fandom? - but good to know the suspense work.
I consider this high praise; every comment has equal weight, regardless of expertise or enthusiasm, but to hear that my experiments worked is nice :D Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed!
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DAMN RIGHT!
This was really good, you had me scared for Zach and unsure of where you were going to go with it, because that's where Chris was and he leads us into the story emotionally. Also, you made the hypothermia believable - that it wasn't too cold out or anything extreme, just one of those things that creeps up.
Finally - liked the image of Chris in a dark cocoon with Zach who is in his boxers O_o
Pinto popped my RPF cherry too! Except I headed straight for the slash :D
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I consider this high praise; every comment has equal weight, regardless of expertise or enthusiasm, but to hear that my experiments worked is nice :D Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed!
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