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heartofoshun October 2 2013, 05:43:24 UTC
Oh, I really love this! Wow! I was totally engaged, undistractable. I love all of the characterizations (and trust me I am picky--because I have my own of all of these guys in my head). I like the touching upon original characters around them. There is more of this? there are parts already written? Off to look.

Don't worry about the canon for their age--I do not have a memory for it or a preferred source. It works very well in this story just the way you are writing it. I imagine them as very young adults reading this. Not quite mature, still in their formative years (maybe comparable to late teens?).

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