One day, I will post something constructive. Today is not that day.

Dec 21, 2008 09:09

Title: Fix
Pairing: Jyabura/Kaku
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,167
Summary: It's a never-ending cycle: Jyabura screws things up and Kaku puts them back together.
A/N: I promise I'll eventually write something longer than like two pages.

He doesn’t want to say that it’s like taking care of Jyabura, because it’s not. It’s like taking care of everything else. )

fanfiction: one piece

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driftingforward December 21 2008, 14:26:38 UTC
Aww. It's so... domestic. And I thought it was constructive!

something that is possibly eggs and definitely on fire

Sounds like my own cooking.

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runic_binary December 21 2008, 14:57:04 UTC
Sometimes, when I run short on inspiration, I think "What would be a difficult concept or action to apply to the characters I want to write about?" and this time, I came up with 'cooking' and I just kind of ran with it. XD

I am actually pretty good with eggs, but that's about where my kitchen skills stop.

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driftingforward December 21 2008, 15:04:04 UTC
(As long as it isn't Lucci cooking. He'd probably just glare at the ingredients and they'd complete the instructions by themselves out of sheer terror. That would be one heck of a short fic.)

I can use a microwave! This stops me from starving to death. Mostly.

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runic_binary December 21 2008, 15:18:25 UTC
I totally wrote Lucci cooking once. There was a lot of glaring involved, to be fair.

I can use a microwave too, but sometimes bad things happen because our microwave is old and crotchety.

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runic_binary December 21 2008, 15:50:50 UTC
No it is not, and don't I know it. XD

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salmon_pink December 21 2008, 16:03:16 UTC
*purrs* Oh, lovely kind of tension, that wonderfully awkward balance between 'everything you do pisses me off/seems like starting a fight' and 'we've always been together and we always will be', wrapped up in a nice ribbon of 'nobody wants to really talk about their feelings'. ♥

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runic_binary December 21 2008, 16:10:15 UTC
I love it when you summarize the entire point of things I write. XD Thank you!

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salmon_pink December 21 2008, 16:22:00 UTC
And I love getting to read your lovely fic, so everyone wins. XD

Plus, eeeeeeee, adorable Chopper dancing! *squishes icon*

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runic_binary December 21 2008, 16:27:31 UTC
THE FEELING IS MUTUAL. ♥

Everyone needs more Chopper.

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lily22 December 21 2008, 19:30:48 UTC
This is so cute, but in that gritty CP9 way which makes it interesting too.

You know, at first this started out as the classic "Person A finds that Person B can't cook, haha" kind of scenario, and it wasn't until Jyabura complained that it occurred to me that Kaku's high-handed actions were actually kind of rude. I mean, to come out of nowhere and dump all of Jyabura's hard work into the sink? Wolfman took it pretty well, considering.

Also, I love how Kaku checks with food to make sure Jyabura's really asleep. But why hasn't Jyabura slept in two days?

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runic_binary December 22 2008, 12:28:55 UTC
Thank you! I tried not to make it...like...fluffy, if that's even possible with these two. XD

Yeah, it was rude. At this point, Kaku's approach is "make sure the apartment doesn't explode and then go back to bed" and it wasn't until Jyabura said something that he realized "Oh, wait...he's a person, not just a walking mess, and he's freaking out too." And Jyabura managed not to have a fit about it because he was, well, freaking out too, and also really tired.

Stress. Staying up going "So, I am now out of a job and a life, what now?" That kind of thing. Maybe I should have put something in about that. XD

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oddrid December 21 2008, 23:55:17 UTC
he looks a complicated cross between annoyed and shifty.

Ahahaha best line! I think this captures Jyabura very, very well.

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runic_binary December 22 2008, 12:13:37 UTC
He is man of staggering awkwardness. =D

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