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Dec 28, 2010 06:06

Title: Frolicking
Fandom: One Piece
Characters: Luffy, Usopp, Chopper, Keimi (Sanji is also there but he's unconscious)
Rating: PG-13 for mild discussion of sex
Word Count: 746
Summary: While the Straw Hats travel into town to save Sanji's life, they discuss the situation. And whine a lot.
A/N: After I read chapter 609, I immediately needed to ( Read more... )

fanfiction: one piece

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salmon_pink December 28 2010, 11:49:38 UTC
“I think maybe Sanji-chin just needs to get laid,” Keimi said thoughtfully.

I like the way the girl thinks!!

Ahh, I loved this. Loved that perfect combination of worry and irritation over Sanji's behaviour, Usopp's eulogy, the revelation of Luffy knowing what a brothel is and Nami's very reasonable insistence that Luffy not breed. (And the image of Nami explaining the concept of a brothel to Luffy is amazing, because you know she wouldn't just straight-up explain it, she'd have to tease and stretch the truth just to enjoy Luffy's reaction, or maybe get a little flustered over why she's stuck explaining such a thing to him.) T'was brillig! ♥

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kaeries December 28 2010, 13:53:23 UTC
xDDDD

That was EPIC conversation. I love Ussop and the fact everyone agrees Luffy shouldn't have offspring...EVER x)

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runic_binary December 31 2010, 13:03:59 UTC
Luffy should never have offspring. Bless his heart.

Glad you liked it~

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runic_binary December 31 2010, 13:06:50 UTC
Keimi knows how this stuff works, man.

...Possibly now I need to write Nami explaining brothels to Luffy. Damn it.

ANYWAY, I'm glad you liked it; thank you!

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paolka06 December 28 2010, 14:19:54 UTC
runic_binary December 31 2010, 13:02:11 UTC
I WAS WORRIED I'D STOPPED WRITING FOR THE FANDOM TOO omg you have no idea how happy I was to be inspired for even a tiny thing for One Piece because it is still my favorite series and I hate going through dry spells like I've had, ugh. I'm really hoping the timeskip and the crew being back together will jumpstart some inspiration! And it most likely will so EXPECT MORE FIC, haha.

Totally friend me, I will friend you back! Jeez, sorry it took me so long to answer these comments. And thank you for the compliments; I'm so glad you like my stuff! <3

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paolka06 January 2 2011, 19:26:53 UTC

penniless1 December 28 2010, 14:42:29 UTC
I...It....I can't hardly...

"IT'S SO FLUFFY!" *glomps story*

I just love this dialogue. It's wonderful in so many, many ways - Usopp is beautifully concerned/snarky, Chopper is the pragmatic optimist and Luffy is Luffishious. Keimi ably defends the frolicking frolics of frolicsome mermaids and a brothel is a cure.

And that none of them should breed. Yessss!

I just love this!!!

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runic_binary December 31 2010, 12:58:32 UTC
None of them should ever breed. Haha, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you~

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oddrid December 28 2010, 17:00:30 UTC
Ahahahaha I love this! Thanks for sharing

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runic_binary December 31 2010, 12:56:59 UTC
Absolutely, thanks!

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tarnera December 28 2010, 20:06:47 UTC
*giggles forever*

I adore this story! It's perfect, really. Good job!

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runic_binary December 31 2010, 12:56:25 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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