Title: Frolicking
Fandom: One Piece
Characters: Luffy, Usopp, Chopper, Keimi (Sanji is also there but he's unconscious)
Rating: PG-13 for mild discussion of sex
Word Count: 746
Summary: While the Straw Hats travel into town to save Sanji's life, they discuss the situation. And whine a lot.
A/N: After I read chapter 609, I immediately needed to
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I like the way the girl thinks!!
Ahh, I loved this. Loved that perfect combination of worry and irritation over Sanji's behaviour, Usopp's eulogy, the revelation of Luffy knowing what a brothel is and Nami's very reasonable insistence that Luffy not breed. (And the image of Nami explaining the concept of a brothel to Luffy is amazing, because you know she wouldn't just straight-up explain it, she'd have to tease and stretch the truth just to enjoy Luffy's reaction, or maybe get a little flustered over why she's stuck explaining such a thing to him.) T'was brillig! ♥
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That was EPIC conversation. I love Ussop and the fact everyone agrees Luffy shouldn't have offspring...EVER x)
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Glad you liked it~
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...Possibly now I need to write Nami explaining brothels to Luffy. Damn it.
ANYWAY, I'm glad you liked it; thank you!
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Totally friend me, I will friend you back! Jeez, sorry it took me so long to answer these comments. And thank you for the compliments; I'm so glad you like my stuff! <3
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"IT'S SO FLUFFY!" *glomps story*
I just love this dialogue. It's wonderful in so many, many ways - Usopp is beautifully concerned/snarky, Chopper is the pragmatic optimist and Luffy is Luffishious. Keimi ably defends the frolicking frolics of frolicsome mermaids and a brothel is a cure.
And that none of them should breed. Yessss!
I just love this!!!
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I adore this story! It's perfect, really. Good job!
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