Comments | runespoor7: [Naruto] Receptionist Duty, Day 37, Evening Shift

runespoor7

[Naruto] Receptionist Duty, Day 37, Evening Shift

Mar 23, 2009 15:01

Title: Receptionist Duty, Day 37, Evening Shift
Fandom: Naruto
Characters/Pairing: Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Neji; pre-NaruSakuSasu
Rating: PG
Summary: AU. It's an ordinarily crazy evening at the hospital and Sakura is stuck on receptionist duty. Yay for meeting new people.

( So, these three guys walk into a hospital. )

ship: naruto/sasuke/sakura, ship: neji/hinata, gen, ch: sasuke, fandom: naruto, ch: neji, fic, au, ch: sakura, shippy parading as gen, ch: naruto

Comments 23

sowell March 23 2009, 14:32:35 UTC

Awesome! What a great AU. I love your characterization of all of them.

runespoor7 March 24 2009, 17:15:28 UTC

Thanks! :D I loved finding out what jobs they would have, and how they would come off in a contemporary setting.

matt_doyle March 23 2009, 15:29:38 UTC

I am drastically amused.

runespoor7 March 24 2009, 17:16:10 UTC

Oh good, it wasn't just me.

matt_doyle March 24 2009, 17:20:17 UTC

Not at all! In fact, I am a greedy reader, and I wants more.

runespoor7 March 24 2009, 17:23:10 UTC

>_> I'll see want I can do (story ideas that are 18 months old; aren't they great?) but I am presently being pestered by Robins.

Flocks and flocks of Robins.

Thread 8

ojuzu March 23 2009, 16:01:17 UTC

You've got me friendshipping every named character in here now. Really hard.

asdfjkl; SO MUCH AWESOME.

runespoor7 March 24 2009, 17:18:14 UTC

It makes the world go roooouuund~ Or something.

No really, I just wanted to show the JUST JUMP EACH OTHER ALREADY-ness of them.

terraminuit March 23 2009, 18:05:47 UTC

Awesome~ XD There is such great interactions with everyone!

runespoor7 March 24 2009, 17:27:13 UTC

I snuggle-loff 'em so very, very much. :D Especially when they're all snippy-bitty-flirty at each other.

loveroftheflame March 24 2009, 00:37:08 UTC

Oh wow. I loved this! It was just so funny and fdjklasjfd now I want more Nejihina when he gets home! :DDD

As with all of your fics it was the tiny details that really make the story rich. Sakura's inner thoughts and the whole description of the emergency room made everything so vivid and realistic!

Looking forward to more!

runespoor7 March 24 2009, 17:31:27 UTC

Sakura was a rocking narrator. Would you believe me if I said that every incident in that emergency room happened to me or someone I knew? (Roller-skating with a jumping rope seemed like a good idea at the time.)

Not sure I'll write more, but if I do it won't pick up until a few weeks/months later in the timeline and the Hinata-sprog will be safely off scene. Yes.

*flashes new icon of HINATA SO HOT*