Comments | runespoor7: [FE] Champagne and Guns II

runespoor7

[FE] Champagne and Guns II

Nov 09, 2008 22:56

Title: Champagne and Guns II
Character/Pairing: Sothe, Micaiah (Sothe/Micaiah)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: 1920s AU.

Notes: Written for 31_days. Still not very spoilery. Rushed like a crazy rushed thing, so it could definitely do with concrit. Also peppered with 20s slang.

There is a first part here.

( the fine art of negotiating. )

radiant dawn, ship: micaiah/sothe, ch: micaiah, fic, au, fandom: fe, ship: micaiah/jarod, champagne and guns, ch: sothe

Comments 10

r_amythest November 10 2008, 01:41:05 UTC

Guns and bandits and grunge. Fun stuff.

The more I think about it, the more I realize that the FE fandom has fewer AUs than the average fandom, proportionally. Hm.

runespoor7 November 10 2008, 11:15:26 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you like.

We should remedy that. :D ?

r_amythest November 10 2008, 11:18:17 UTC

I'm already working on it! 'Tis my NaNo.

runespoor7 November 10 2008, 11:22:51 UTC

:DDDDD

Thread 7

myaru November 12 2008, 22:13:25 UTC

This gets better and better. (I just died when Jarod came into it. XD) Have I mentioned I love you for this? Because I do. I really do. And you make me love Sothe, too, which I didn't believe was possible.

The last scene was really beautiful. You set it up well.

runespoor7 November 12 2008, 22:54:22 UTC

Perfect opportunity to use Jarod. u_u I like Sothe, but I wish he'd let me talk or get in the head of other characters once in a while. (You know I posted a third fragment for this, right? Very short, though.)

You set it up well.
Ah, thank you. I was afraid I'd left it too short, too abrupt, that I should've put more ~*hints*~ earlier in the story... I was running so very out of time toward the end, it wasn't even remotely funny.

myaru November 12 2008, 23:08:19 UTC

Jarod does 'smug bastard' so well, it almost makes me love him too. He doesn't even have to say anything - this is where the strength of Sothe's voice really works though, because even though you're not jumping to other characters, he does an excellent job of characterizing them for you. And that it's unreliable just makes it better, because his opinions are hilarious.

I have the other fragment open in a tab, but I'm so behind on reading/commenting. I'm hoping to get to it tonight after I've worked on my essay a bit.

Your hints were just enough, I think. If you'd said more, you would have been obligated to either write several hundred more words, or... well, it works out fine.

Ahahaha, that sounds like me trying to get Chronicle chapters done for the deadline. XD