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runespoor7

[Naruto] No Legends Left

Nov 02, 2008 21:08

Title: No Legends Left
Day/Theme: Nov 2 - hidden and open subcultures
Series: Naruto
Character/Pairing: the girl of chapter 421, Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke
Rating: PG
Summary: Over twenty years after the current chapters, Madara has won. There are no longer Hidden Villages. But there are still ninjas; they just need to be hidden. There's no place left ( Read more... )

ship: naruto/sasuke/sakura, gen, ch: sasuke, fandom: naruto, fic, ch: sakura, shippy parading as gen, ch: naruto

Comments 35

monique_27 November 2 2008, 20:56:40 UTC

Oh ... oh!

*cannot speak*

*__*

runespoor7 November 2 2008, 21:10:16 UTC

...that a good oh or a bad oh? It's been a while since I wrote Naruto fic... *iz worried*

monique_27 November 4 2008, 02:55:04 UTC

Good. Very, very good awesomegreatfantasticyummyyeeeeees ... ;)

I loved what you did with this whole thing. The "not so well hidden" villages and ninja finally need to be hidden - it's dark and sad but so full of rebellion and hope too. And Team 7 ... ah. Love them. ♥

So glad you're sharing OT3 Team7 awesomeness. ^^

zephyras13 November 2 2008, 22:23:13 UTC

I like it! At first, I was confused because I thought the main character was Sakura, but the end cleared it up. Also, I think that the girl from chapter 421's name is Tami. It's what someone yells out when she gets attacked, I'm pretty sure. Great work!

runespoor7 November 3 2008, 07:49:42 UTC

I don't remember her having a name, but it'd be so cool if Kishimoto had given her one! :D Because you know she's totally part of Sakura's fanclub now. I'll reread to check. (And if she does have a name I'll be able to changea few sentences to make them less awkward, and maybe even she'll get a female comrade, fufufufufu! Crazy stuff!)

I'm glad you like! :D Conversely, I love your icon.

lucathia_rykatu November 3 2008, 00:23:26 UTC

I also thought the girl was Sakura at first, but then the age didn't match up. I very much enjoyed the girl's thinking. All that hiding, all that hinting towards how they're living. The ending is hopeful, which is much love. <3

runespoor7 November 3 2008, 07:56:06 UTC

Yeah, if I had more time I'd have been able to think of things to make them more different, but I was too worried about trying to write it on time yesterday. :/ But well, I'm glad it works out in the end! :D

Future-building was much fun. :3 And regarding the ending: you try telling Team Seven they've got to drop the massive demonstrations of affection destruction.

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runespoor7 November 3 2008, 08:02:02 UTC

I'm glad you like! :DDD

I'll admit the idea of a future where ninja need to stay hidden was born out of the pointing out that their Hidden Villages are not so well-hidden. I wanted to contrast that.

Team Seven: bringing hope and destruction to the world since the bell test, hell yeah. <- OT3: showing.

Thank youuuu for the review!

askerian November 3 2008, 02:55:17 UTC

... OH. T____________________T oh wow. That's amazing. With the bleakness all around and then hope coming back and eeeeeee. *flailflail* gah, i'm all bouncy now.

THE LITTLE GIRL. How awesome is that? super awesome. supersuperawesome. T^T

you can't keep a ninja down, nanananana~

runespoor7 November 3 2008, 08:07:18 UTC

I joked that now that little girl wanted to be a ninja thanks to Sakura being all awesome and saving her, and then I went and wrote it. u_u

hope coming back = cause big-scale destruction and banter in the middle of a battle is ninja for love goofiness HOPE. TRUFAX.

HAPPY YOU LIKED! :D

make some noise~