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[Naruto] Things in Sound

Jun 10, 2008 14:27

Title: Things in Sound
Author: runespoor7
Rating: R
Summary: Sasuke's life in the Sound. [AU: Sound!Hinata; KabuHina. Team Seven usual complications.]

Notes: outtake from the Things that could have happened had Hizashi been the older son series, which are… basically exactly what they sound like. A collection of AUs on that premise. This one is: Sound Hinata ( Read more... )

ch: kabuto, things in sound, ch: hinata, a cage is a curse, ch: sasuke, fandom: naruto, fic, au, break a cliché!, ship: kabuto/hinata, ch: orochimaru

Comments 9

mattador June 10 2008, 15:58:18 UTC

Definitely some unexpected developments there, XD. Aaaand Orochimaru is still the creepy pedo.

runespoor7 June 12 2008, 23:35:41 UTC

Weeell, Orochimaru = pedo is pretty close to canon anyway. Metaphorically. Not that Sasuke realises that, but... ;)

outlawpoet June 10 2008, 18:58:02 UTC

Who did Neji fight in the Chuunin exam, and why did Naruto defeat Neji, without his drive to prove him wrong about Fate?

runespoor7 June 12 2008, 23:37:48 UTC

That wasn't the focus of the fic. I suppose Naruto defeated Neji because he wanted to become a chuunin. :)

lita_of_jupiter June 10 2008, 20:55:29 UTC

Hinata and Kabuto!

I loved how though she hates konoha she has no special hatred for her cla... they hold no power over her that way!
and also Sasuke being confused as to his place in sound and their relationship was cute!

also loved him as voyeur!

runespoor7 June 12 2008, 23:40:49 UTC

^___^

Yay for Denial!Sasuke working for you!

also loved him as voyeur!
He was so mortified, it was a joy to write. Plus I got to play with his brother issues. :D

amaiko June 15 2008, 07:58:31 UTC

:DD

Yay, sequel! How do you feel about this one compared to the first, btw?

Also, I like your Sasuke far, far more than canon Sasuke right now. Just saying.

And there, faced with Hinata's placid estrangement from her blood clan, Sasuke doesn't have an answer.

Curious--if push ever came to shove and Oro did actually manage to destroy Konoha--would Hinata care if the Hyuuga were killed off? Would she care if they were spared? Does she have any interest in them at all?

With Orochimaru, every time it's like there's a fucking god that has stepped into the room, and he looks at them, affectionately, at every single one of them, and he has kind words for at least a handful of them But with Oro, it's all fake for the most part, poor things ( ... )

runespoor7 June 16 2008, 08:08:15 UTC

I... have no idea how I feel about it. Conflicted. Sasuke's relations with his team and his brother are exactly like in canon, but at the same time, the world is AU... :/ And I also felt like the first had a one-ness that's lacking here, the fic being more or less made up of random bits of Sasuke stream-of-consciousness with no given structure and/or plot beside Ambience. And it's... probably a bit long for a character sketch. At the same time I like it, because describing twisted Sound things = always fun.

Does she have any interest in them at all?

She thinks she doesn't, that's for sure, and she'd never realise it even if she was wrong, not if they stayed 'the Hyuuga'. She'd need to know them before her feelings left the blank state.

LOL at voyeur Sasuke.

Sasuke Never Wants to Speak About That Again Ever. Also, Sasuke Doesn't Get the pedotastic-ness of Oro, so that mostly gets shoved under the blank, whereas even he cannot possibly misunderstand Kabuto and Hinata going at it in innappropriate places. ;)

Seems that Hinata's ( ... )

amaiko June 18 2008, 00:50:57 UTC

I... have no idea how I feel about it. Conflicted. Sasuke's relations with his team and his brother are exactly like in canon, but at the same time, the world is AU... :/

But does everything have to change, in a AU that's mostly focused around the different life of one character? Sasuke's life wouldn't necessarily be affected by Hinata being abandoned in this world: they barely (scratch that, never) interact in canon, so why should Hinata's different circumstances affect him and the way he acts? Unless there's more about this world that's different beyond Hinata being in Sound, but I didn't really get the sense that that was the case.

And it's... probably a bit long for a character sketch. At the same time I like it, because describing twisted Sound things = always fun.

It's a Sound sketch with a Sasuke-flavored perspective. :D

Sasuke Never Wants to Speak About That Again Ever.

There's nothing in that sentence that says he won't think about it, though. :DDD

Well, yeah, but he enjoys denying Hinata, and it turns him on when ( ... )