[Naruto] Twelve

Jun 02, 2008 01:56

Title: Twelve
Author: runespoor7
Rating: PG
Summary: Sakura is twelve and in love.

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ch: sakura, ship: sakura/sasuke, ch: sasuke, fandom: naruto, fic

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ironywithwit June 2 2008, 00:41:58 UTC
I thought this was beautiful. Especially that part with her and Ino.

Thank you for sharing :D

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runespoor7 June 2 2008, 07:11:52 UTC
I'm glad you liked! Thank you for reviewing! :)

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runespoor7 June 2 2008, 07:12:37 UTC
Thanks! ^_^

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araine June 2 2008, 10:10:35 UTC
That was both brilliant and beautiful. Sakura's girlcrush/love is serious win.

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runespoor7 June 2 2008, 11:24:14 UTC
And so's Sakura stubborness about it. Thanks for the review!

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icequeenanna June 2 2008, 15:21:50 UTC
Simply beautiful! You did a really nice job there ^^ Though, I thought that the ending was a bit abrupt.

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runespoor7 June 2 2008, 17:42:35 UTC
Thank you! I was going for an abrupt ending, so it's a good thing that it comes across. Or maybe it's too much. ^^;;

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lilacfield June 3 2008, 15:32:28 UTC
Lovely - I enjoy the various emotions and their descriptions. And I like the ending, just ftr :)

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runespoor7 June 5 2008, 06:20:24 UTC
Ah, thank you. ^^ *confidence: +1*

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