[Naruto] NejiHina Smut Theme 17

[runespoor7]

Title: NejiHina Smut Themes 17
Author: runespoor7
Rating: NC-17 as a whole. More like PG-13 for this one.
Summary: fifth post of the it’s-all-about-sex theme set.
Notes: I DON’T CARE ABOUT THE RATING. I AM HAPPY ABOUT IT. :D

Comments

[monique_27]

Is it so wrong of me to be desperately in love with this? *goes back to read it again*

I love Naruto. And Neji. The tone and writing is gorgeous, and gods I want Hinata and Neji to jump into a bed now. You're good at that. ;p

[runespoor7]

I don't know. I'm of the opinion that people who don't have at least a slight weakness for unrequited have no souls, or something.

Naruto is my imaginary lover fictional crush Narutoverse soulmate character-that-gets-to-steal-the-fic-without-trying. So you can judge if I'm happy you think he's okay!

I want Hinata and Neji to jump into a bed now

You and Neji both.

THANK YOU.

[loveroftheflame]

Oh dear lord I love this... need more now! Please pleeeeeease do a second half where Hinata isn't quite as oblivious to this as Neji thinks!

[runespoor7]

If inspiration strikes, I might do a second part, but so far, it isn't looking that way. ...'sides, if I did, it'd end up multi-chaptered and shojoesque in a bad way.

Leader

[anonymous]

You know for a minute there, I though you were going to say the Hinata was dating Sasuke.

Then Neji would really have a reason to hate Sasuke.

Anyways great chap. can't wait for more

Re: Leader

[runespoor7]

Hahaha, no, if anyone she'd have dated Ino. No, Neji just doesn't like Sasuke for reasons that have nothing to do with Hinata and everything to do with Sasuke getting on Neji's nerves a lot.

And I think in some ways, he sees a little of himself in Sasuke and he resents that Sasuke got a happy ending and that he didn't, and that fate confused them or something; Sasuke once wanted to rebuild the Uchiha and Neji is now the Hyuuga head, and Sasuke gets his happy ending with his teammates while Neji is alone, something which he never wanted. (There might also be that Neji isn't as over Naruto as he thinks he is, mostly because he never realised he just may be slightly in love with Naruto.)

Plus I imagine Sasuke smirks a lot of the time and brushes his teammates away and looks at Neji in a way that pretty much screams 'I'm superior to you, and I know why' - and yes, it's totally related to Sasuke's relationship with Naruto and Sakura and Neji's lack of one with Hinata.

Humm...

[anonymous]

I liked it ;D
But the ending is quite open :D
Would you allow me to write some continuance ^^

I read some similar fanfic on fanfiction.com, but the difference was, that fanfic couldn't be continued, yours can ^^

(This would be the first longer fanfic I write in English...)

Ah yes, I enjoy smut (just a little bit, not too overdone) ^^ don't know why ^^ probably I am addicted a bit ^^

Flammendo

Re: Humm...

[runespoor7]

If you want to, why not? Just make sure to mark my fic as a prologue and credit me, something like that. Let me know when you do post it?

This would be the first longer fanfic I write in English...

^_^ I don't write a lot of long fics either, and English isn't my mother-tongue either, so... Yeah, good luck on that!

Glad you liked!

Re: Humm...

[anonymous]

Je sais. J'ai lu ton description. Mais mon Francais est plus mauvaise que mon Anglais et ca veut dire, je pense j'ai ecrit peut etre 20 fautes ici ou plus ^^
(Je n'ai pas ecrite quelque chose en francais pour humm.. . un, deux... sept anees ^^)

Je pouvait ecrire quelquechose en Allemand ci tu peux le lire ;D c'est beaucoup plus facile :D

Ah, je voudrait te dire que ton Anglais est super pour un Francais. (Les Francaises je connais ne peux pas parler des phrases faciles en Anglais.)

Re: Humm...

[runespoor7]

Oh no, I don't read German. Entshuldigünge, Ich spreche kein Deutsch. >_> That's about all I've ever known how to say, and I'm pretty sure there's a mistake. ;_; I can never be sure if it's 'kein' or 'keine'. ;_;

Ah, je voudrait te dire que ton Anglais est super pour un Francais.

Haha, fandom taught me English. Fic-reading ftw. ;)

[runespoor7]

#^____^#

Thank you a lot. It means a lot that people like these, and haha, compliments do make my day! :D I'm glad you like my Neji - I always find him easiest to write when he's in full unrequited-mode, for some reason. Not that I like angst or anything. >_>

Yeah, I don't know for other people, but I don't write Hyuuga Head!Neji too often. In a way it means that Hinata failed, you know? She may have got better, but she wasn't good enough - and I suppose what I like best about characters getting stronger is the point when they make everyone else realise how much they've changed, rather than the change in itself.

Anyway, thanks for the review! :D