[Naruto] NejiHina Smut Themes 1-5

Nov 07, 2007 11:10

Title: NejiHina Smut Themes 1-5
Author: runespoor7
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Bunch o’ smutty drabbles.
Notes: The lovely hiasobi posted a theme set back in March, and I’ve been struggling on-again-off-again with this idea since then. For the record, I hate writing smut so a number of these will likely be not all that graphic. They’ll be sex-related, at least. >_>

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ship: neji/hinata, theme set smut, ch: hinata, smut, fandom: naruto, ch: neji, fic

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heronite November 7 2007, 14:22:48 UTC
One of the things Neji came to learn was that just because Hinata cried out or whimpered didn't mean it was bad. With a lovely kinky intro like that, the fic could have ended just there. :d ... no wait, more is always better. XD It almost made me sorry when the last sentence turned out like a bucket of cold water. X'D The last sentence was amazingly insightful: it's when people don't react that you know something has gone way too wrong ( ... )

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runespoor7 November 8 2007, 16:58:07 UTC
Phew, I sure am glad you think these work. The truth of the matter is that graphic bores me so bad, I generally try to find ways to work around it. I'd like to write pretty much anything before I write stick-a-into-slot-b. ...It's just really repetitive, and long, and blah.

So yay, I extrapolate. I also try imitating the style of a few authors I like who write these really short, really good fics/fragments/scenes, but I must admit so far I'm failing. xD

~working on the next batch!

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heronite November 8 2007, 17:35:08 UTC
Neji then proceeded to stick a into slot b.

... *nosebleed* *makes note of using logic game analogies*

I'm not sure how you compare to those other authors, but remember this: no matter how hard you try, you won't ever become Shakespear. That doesn't mean you can't be a hell lot of a great author though. If all the people who can't measure up to Shakespear were to give up writing, the world would be a rather sad place. XD

Basically, don't leave us with those lame writers that make up 90% of ff.net. ;_;

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runespoor7 November 8 2007, 17:44:03 UTC
Oh, don't worry, it's just that I think I have a style of writing that relies heavily on scenes and story-telling (the emotions a character feels during/after a certain event), and not on, for instance, concepts.

So not leaving the Naruto fandom in the foreseeable future. Mwahaha, you're not getting rid of me that easily! :p

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kamecchi November 8 2007, 01:42:16 UTC
Oh, my god. Thank you. Just when I was thirsty for some NejiHina porn. Thank you. *I tried to DRAW porn, but I get embarrassed D:* Hot... hot damn. This is so damn hot ♥ Lovely ♥

And oh, my god. Bondage ♥ Goddamn, that's hot!! I like how Neji wants to be gentle with Hinata, but he's always rough! That's pretty cute ♥

The fifth theme was... so perverted ♥ Touching her when she's sleeping?! You're a sneaky snake, Neji!

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runespoor7 November 8 2007, 16:51:30 UTC
:D Happy to deliver! Those pesky NejiHina porn urges, grr.

Lol, you get embarrassed, I get bored. And lazy. "Okay, I got them in the mood. *only took 800 words, phew* ...Now I've got to make them actually have sex. And describe it. ... ...you know I think I've already made them have sex. Let's fade to black and write something else."

Kinky sex is the least boring to write.

I'm glad you thought those worked!

And, heh, for the fifth... Think about it this way: it's reverence. *<- is being sincere, so wut* It's the expression of how pure and beautiful and obsessive his love for her is! Also, I bet she totally likes waking up that way.

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thallein November 18 2007, 19:58:21 UTC
very hot! i thought the first one was a little awkward but the rest had me glued to the screen *drools* looking forward to more <33333

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