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[Naruto] The Return 5/5

Jan 15, 2007 15:51

Title: The Return
Author: runespoor7
Rating: PG-13
Summary: In the middle of a war the usual thing is that people die. It's more unusual when they return alive after having been thought dead for three months. Hinata, after being a prisoner in Sound, does.
Notes: Well, this is it. The end. With Shikaku. And, well, most of everyone. Thank you for your support ( Read more... )

celebrationverse, ship: neji/hinata, gen, ch: hinata, ch: temari, ship: temari/shikamaru, fandom: naruto, ch: shikaku, ch: neji, fic, ch: tsunade, ch: shikamaru, shippy parading as gen

Comments 8

cutemara January 15 2007, 22:31:35 UTC

oh, but, but there was barely any Neji/Hinata interaction...we didn't even get to see what their relationship is like...

runespoor7 January 17 2007, 14:31:01 UTC

Well, I planned the fic as an outsider-looking-in thing - of course I couldn't show how Neji and Hinata relate to one another in private, but on the other hand, we know how they interact in public, and how most people perceive them. (and there was the part where they-were-the-only-two-people-in-the-room-cue-the-violins. ;))

I know you've read - and reviewed! :)- my fic Oversights and Celebrations in the same 'verse, but I can tell you I'm working on several other fics/ficlets in this verse.

cutemara January 17 2007, 18:56:04 UTC

*blinks*

They're in the same universe?

whoops...

Looking forward to reading the ones you're working on!

lita_of_jupiter January 16 2007, 22:16:25 UTC

ohh
you have to expand this universe!
love all that you have done with it!
the way you write is very enticing, i quite like it
and the celebration which I read when I finished this piece
was very funny and shed a lot more light into the nejihina relationshp!

runespoor7 January 17 2007, 14:32:38 UTC

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it!

you have to expand this universe!
It sure shows no sign of letting go of me. ;)

lita_of_jupiter January 17 2007, 15:04:46 UTC

I am very glad to hear that!

hiasobi February 5 2007, 03:21:10 UTC

OMG! The tension in this chapter! And ARG! The unspoken-but-so-balant, a million-things-unsaid, there-is-only-you-and-me, we-ARE-Hyuuga! NejiandHinata relationship! GaH! Gah! I wanted to grab his shoulder and just SHAKE him!

Very very nicely writing undertones. Love it. ANd I crack up over Shikaku's distress. XD

runespoor7 February 6 2007, 10:04:25 UTC

Konoha has to be very blind not to pick up on the NejiHina. But, you know, 'they're Hyuuga', so somehow that explains everything... -_-

Any fic focusing at least in part on the Nara men should involve torture of some kind. :3 but Shikaku wasn't the one Temari was aiming to distress! she's that good, really.

Glad you liked!