Comments | runespoor7: [Naruto] The Liar

runespoor7

[Naruto] The Liar

Jan 01, 2014 04:02

Title: The Liar
Characters: Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura (NaruSakuSasu-ish, NaruSasu)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "...And I love you so much, I'm gonna let you kill me...": a confrontation between Sasuke and his old team.
Notes: This is Sasuke narrating, so as usual it's an exercise in denial and selective obliviousness. An alternate confrontation before ( Read more... )

ship: naruto/sasuke, ship: naruto/sasuke/sakura, ch: sasuke, fandom: naruto, fic, ch: sakura, shippy parading as gen, ch: naruto

Comments 3

askerian January 1 2014, 13:13:48 UTC

okay this is gorgeous and good job with the unreliable narrator there oh sasuke you stupid lonely self absorbed asshole.

runespoor7 January 2 2014, 01:08:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the fine line of "Sasuke you are attracted to them and also you care" worked. Isn't it terrifying that he's better at dissecting their motivations than he is at introspection?

eos_joy January 8 2014, 07:01:23 UTC

*just noticed my NaruSakuSasu icon isn't here WUTZ*

So I only just commented on the 3-ficathon post, but I had to comment here too: I adore this. I am crazy grateful that you didn't stop at 3 sentences and I love everything: the flow, the timing, the characterization, the dialogue, silly, silly Sasuke - so much love!! <3 Very well done. Thank you so much for filling this prompt. ^^