Comments | runespoor7: [Naruto] And then we'll make the rules

runespoor7

[Naruto] And then we'll make the rules

Dec 06, 2011 15:19

Title: And then we’ll make the rules
Pairing: Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura parading as gen
Rating: PG-13
Warning: mention of child abuse and ephebophilia
Summary: Sakura’s parents run a foster home. Guess which orphans they take in. AU.
Notes: two parts. Title from the Nields’ “This Town is Wrong”; I’ve been sitting on this song for five years, knowing it ( Read more... )

ship: naruto/sasuke/sakura, gen, ch: sasuke, fandom: naruto, 3sentence, fic, au, ch: sakura, shippy parading as gen, ch: naruto

Comments 10

syrraki December 6 2011, 19:12:36 UTC

They would pull her hair, she pointed out to her parents in desperation, but they didn't listen.

LOVE IT.

but then omg the second part SASUKE YOU NFSKJDFSKDHSDJ. of course. of course he would do something BASTARDLY LIKE THAT.

I liked Naruto laughing at Sakura swearing and Naruto. I like Naruto.

SAKURA'S BOOTS. YES. WELL DONE.

um when is the rest of this coming? where is it? can I have it now?

runespoor7 December 7 2011, 11:40:26 UTC

YAY.

Sakura was also worried that they'd make fun of her forehead, but she'd been very determined since Ino helped her that she wouldn't let people make her feel ashamed of her forehead anymore. So: hair. It was logical!

I think Sasuke also left a note saying thank you. Sakura may or may not have found it when she woke up.

It does THINGS to Naruto when Sakura swears. It makes him GIDDY.

I don't thiiiiink I'm going to be writing any more of this. ...Maybe one scene more. No promises.

matt_doyle December 6 2011, 19:28:13 UTC

Awesome. Sakura, as usual, is made of win.

runespoor7 December 7 2011, 11:41:37 UTC

I love them so much. I love her so much! I was so happy to write her and write their drama! Sorry, I'm kind of amazed still.

Anyway, I'm happy you liked it!

kane_shi_megami December 7 2011, 03:53:09 UTC

LOVE this plot and whole wonderfulness you have going here.

runespoor7 December 7 2011, 11:33:27 UTC

\o/ Thank you!

shiny_glor_chan December 7 2011, 15:06:02 UTC

<3 Loved this. Can has more of this 'verse? <3?

runespoor7 December 9 2011, 13:30:43 UTC

HOPEFULLY NOT NOW. >:( DEADLINES.

But I'm always happy to know you like!

askerian December 13 2011, 14:08:42 UTC

I really like the boots line.

This is an interesting AU. Mmm. I liked how Sasuke drugged her instead of hitting her in the back of the head like canon, because he wouldn't have learned how to judge a blow like that in this 'verse. XD Mmm. Also love on the Hinata thing and how Naruto and Sakura bounce off each other. prr prr prr.

runespoor7 December 14 2011, 14:02:45 UTC

Thank you! The boots made it into the fic by accident. There needed to be something on top of the backpack when Sakura took it from her closet, so I put boots there, and when I needed to wrap up the fic I realized they were The Boots. I was pretty happy with that line; good to know it's striking.

I knew from moment one Sasuke was going to drug her. :3 Because that's what he does. Writing Naruto and Sakura together is always so much fun. I also like to think that Hinata left Sakura's house because her uncle and aunt got custody >_> Neji is the most well-adjusted in this verse it'd be eerie to think about it.