Comments | runaway_tales: Lemon-Lime Sorbet 5, Cookies & Cream 24 [Divide and Rule] (1/2)

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Lemon-Lime Sorbet 5, Cookies & Cream 24 [Divide and Rule] (1/2)

Oct 12, 2017 17:39

Title: Substitute
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): Lemon-Lime Sorbet 5 (sweet nothings); Cookies & Cream 24 (play)
Toppings/Extras: Brownie + Chopped Nuts + Gummy Bunnies (also written for hc_bingo square “grief” and Gen Prompt Bingo square “Happy Endings.”)
Rating: All ages/PG
Word Count: 13,508
Notes: Coffee shop AU, ( Read more... )

[challenge] cookies n cream, [topping] chopped nuts, [extra] brownie, [topping] gummy bunnies, [author] lost_spook, [challenge] lemon-lime sorbet

Comments 4

skybirdday October 13 2017, 01:06:41 UTC

Ahhh. . .it would have been nice if I read
the story in order! (oops, sorry!). Still
I like it. Are you going to continue this?

lost_spook October 13 2017, 08:53:56 UTC

Heh, don't worry! Thank you for reading (especially when it came back to front). I don't have any plans to continue, but I suppose you can never rule these things out.

fachefaucheux January 1 2018, 21:33:04 UTC

Ah, excellent! You did a good job of translating all their backstory into modern (and slightly less world-at-stake) circumstances. The bit with the shoe just about killed me. XD

*scurries on to part 2*

lost_spook January 2 2018, 20:34:06 UTC

Thank you! And because one of the prompts was "Happy Endings" I was getting some fairy tale edges in there (with the shoe, and Edward having to find her, and Edward's forest-of-thorns wallpaper in his house).