Comments | runaway_tales: Flavour of the Day (21/05/16), White Chocolate 26, Prune 10 [Divide and Rule]

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Flavour of the Day (21/05/16), White Chocolate 26, Prune 10 [Divide and Rule]

May 21, 2016 15:13

Title: Third Time Lucky
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): Flavour of the Day 21/05/16 (complaisant); White Chocolate #26 (infatuation), Prune #10 (follow your heart)
Toppings/Extras: Cookie Crumbs (remix of one ‘date’ in The Games We Play from Edward’s POV); Malt - Birthday prompt 2015 ( Be careful of the curse ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [topping] cookie crumbs, [challenge] prune, [author] lost_spook, [challenge] white chocolate, [challenge] flavor of the day

Comments 3

fachefaucheux May 24 2016, 23:26:08 UTC

I liked seeing this again from Edward's perspective. Though his worries do come across as being very genuine, they're still cute, somehow...

lost_spook May 25 2016, 08:55:01 UTC

Thank you! I only realised when I wrote this that I've never written anything to explain what Edward was thinking (or not thinking) that week. Mostly justifying things he shouldn't with logic and in between panicking and feeling guilty, but still justifying the things he shouldn't with logic to get what he wants. This bit is nearly 100% guilt and panic and Julia, it's fair to say. :-D

lost_spook May 25 2016, 17:03:32 UTC

PS.

When I was very ill the other month I wound up making gifs. And, hey, look what happened, moving Victorian Edward-and-Julias! (The usual warning for TERRIBLE FAKE HAIR applies; also warnings for any where you can tell Gilbert Osmond is Gilbert Osmond, ack, sorry):

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