Vanilla (1)

Apr 01, 2016 23:00

Title: Not On The List
Author: morethanmending
Rating: PG
Word Count: 941
Universe: Gone WIP
Characters: John Warner, Abigail Warner
Fic Contains: a mild jump scare, more for John than for the audience
Notes: Written for the flavor "Vanilla" - prompt #01 "Shopping".

Summary: Food's getting low back at the homestead. John takes Abigail shopping.

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[author] morethanmending, [challenge] vanilla

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badass_tiger April 2 2016, 12:31:04 UTC
Aww, there's nothing like cats for company, even during an apocalypse! I love your narrative style, and Abigail is such a cute character. I probably enjoyed the scene where John was startled by the cat more than I should have ^^

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morethanmending April 2 2016, 23:48:55 UTC
In my book cats are always fun for company, and never more so than during an apocalypse. ;D

Thank you for your lovely comment! I like Abigail as well. She's got a lot of spunk in her. I worry for her father, if anything were ever to happen to her. I think she's his little bit of light that keeps him grounded during such strange times.

Thanks again!

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lost_spook April 2 2016, 13:17:14 UTC
Aw, very good! I like your premise, too. Very Survivors-esque!

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morethanmending April 2 2016, 23:57:23 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm looking forward to finding out where this little bunny will lead. :D

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skybirdday April 3 2016, 22:43:48 UTC
Hmm. . .John is sweet to his little girl even taking another
cat home. I wonder if Abby gets lonely. Keep this up! :)

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morethanmending April 4 2016, 04:09:18 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm excited to write up another installment.

I think Abby gets lonely from time to time, but I imagine it's probably worse on John since most of his life was spent in the non-apocalyptic world. I think he grumbles and growls but in the end he enjoys having the animals around as much as she does. ;)

Thank you again for reading!

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rustydragonfly April 5 2016, 18:44:00 UTC
I love that they kept the kitty. I always worry about animals in post -apoc fiction, I'm glad to see this one gets taken care of!

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morethanmending April 7 2016, 12:45:43 UTC
Aw, thanks! I'm glad they did too. Poor cat looks like he could use a little love. :)

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