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White Chocolate 17 [Divide and Rule]

Jan 25, 2016 20:48

Title: Disillusionment
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): White Chocolate #17 (disappointment)
Toppings/Extras: Hot Fudge
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1377
Notes: 1959; Ron Whittaker, Thomas Hallam, Alan Jemmings. (I seem to have had this one hanging around for a while.)
Summary: Whittaker isn’t happy about anything ( Read more... )

[topping] hot fudge, [author] lost_spook, [challenge] white chocolate

Comments 3

fachefaucheux January 26 2016, 03:14:05 UTC

Ah, politicking! This was a good piece--I'm glad to finally see more of how the whole blackmail thing unfolded. And it's nice to see Whittaker take a stand...though I don't know if that'd be too noble of a way to describe it...

lost_spook January 26 2016, 12:49:31 UTC

Thanks! Whittaker at this stage is just feeling frustrated with everyone else in the world, and why wouldn't he? ;-) (Heh, it's funny; this sat in my notebook for so long because it felt as if it didn't add anything to canon... but apparently it does?)

fachefaucheux January 27 2016, 03:28:08 UTC

It totally does! I mean, you can pick up on the whole blackmail deal by reference, but it's also helpful to see it actually played out too.