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Sea Salt 2, Coffee 1 [Divide and Rule]

Nov 30, 2015 17:36

Title: The Ravens Are Circling
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): Sea Salt #2 (river), Coffee #1 (coffee)
Toppings/Extras: Malt - PFtH (Jack: the death come to find her); My Treat - Parliament on the Thames - and the depths will keep its secrets).
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1438
Notes: 1961; Jack Brayfield/Afzal Syed ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [challenge] sea salt, [challenge] coffee, [author] lost_spook

Comments 4

ichthusfish December 1 2015, 01:11:00 UTC

Love the way you used the prompts! I wasn't expecting it, and it had a lot of foreboding to it. I think you wrote the characters very well - I could see them quite clearly, and the 'unspoken conversation' between them made me smile a lot. Nice piece :)

lost_spook December 1 2015, 14:29:53 UTC

Aw, thank you. :-)

fachefaucheux December 1 2015, 02:47:13 UTC

I liked this a lot...my sort of thing, blowing up government institutions and having people assassinated. Potentially. Not literally, of course, just, er, in fiction. I hope we get to see more of these two soon!

“I’m not a journalist,” Afzal said. “I can tell the truth.”--ah, too true, too true...

lost_spook December 1 2015, 14:29:16 UTC

Thank you! I don't think anyone actually got assassinated, though. Just democracy and Big Ben. ;-)