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Sea Salt 5 [Divide and Rule]

Nov 28, 2015 20:24

Title: Coming of Age
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): Sea Salt #5 (dew)
Toppings/Extras: Pocky + Malt - Ghosts of the Past #2 (end of childhood/beginning of adulthood) + My Treat - Emily is gone, Elizabeth is born.
Rating: All ages
Word Count: 100
Notes: 1962; Elizabeth Cardew.
Summary: Emily leaves the last ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [challenge] sea salt, [extra] pocky, [author] lost_spook

Comments 4

ichthusfish December 1 2015, 00:57:34 UTC

Aww, this piece is so sad :( No child should be that grown up so young. Very nicely narrated pocky.

lost_spook December 1 2015, 14:27:08 UTC

Thank you! And poor Emily, yes. None of it was her fault.

fachefaucheux December 1 2015, 02:23:12 UTC

I agree, this is very sad...excellent use of the My Treat prompt, too.

lost_spook December 1 2015, 14:27:26 UTC

Thank you!