Passionfruit 24, Prune 7 [Divide and Rule]

[lost_spook]

Title: These Foolish Things
Author: lost_spook
Story: Heroes of the Revolution (Divide & Rule)
Flavor(s): Passionfruit #24 (I am part of all that I have met), Prune #7 (somebody stop me)
Toppings/Extras: Pocky Chain
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 700 (7 x 100 words, at least according to MS Word)
Notes: 1924-1960; Edward Iveson, Elizabeth Iveson, Caroline Sheldon

Comments

[fachefaucheux]

You did a really good job with this! Pocky chains seem to almost want to make themselves go horribly wrong, but you kept them in line. All the pieces came together to make a nice progression illuminating why Edward is, well, Edward. That last pocky, though...argh, my heart. T___T

[lost_spook]

Aw, thank you! ♥

And this one felt natural (I do like writing things that are basically linked scenes that add up to the whole, as you may have picked up on already), but I can imagine it being more difficult to do for something else, especially a more direct sequence of actions or something.

[roisin_farrell]

Okay, I must know more about Peggy.

[lost_spook]

♥ I'm posting stuff backwards again - you will, I promise! :-)

[promisesesimorp]

I really like this pocky chain. It was great. Plus I love Edward so haha

[lost_spook]

Thank you! :-)

[typeroftales]

Well, this is excellent. Great character work.

I enjoy your writing so much. It's difficult not to just turn fangirl on you. So, you know, imagine lots of smilies and exclamation marks if you please.

Cheers,
Melanie

[lost_spook]

Aw, thank you so much! (And if you do feel the wish to turn fangirl on me, don't hold back on my account. It's not as if it's something that happens very often, and my head is quite small, it'll cope with the swelling! ;-D)

♥

[flowsoffire]

Oh, this is beautiful-every one of them was very nice insight, and the echo between his mother's and Emily's was so, so very bittersweet. Love it :) ♥

[lost_spook]

Thank you! I loved writing it. :-)