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Games We Play

May 12, 2015 02:14

Title:【 Games We Play 】
Author: NIL » allseeingusagi
Story: Project Airhead
Flavor(s): Chocolate 13 » humility | Banana Cream 7 » hush
Toppings/Extras: N/A
Rating: T for Teen (lawdy that language!)
Word Count: 2'152

Notes: You ever feel off about your writing? That's been me with my entire life lately. Not dead but incredibly dead like. Feeling kind of iffy about ( Read more... )

[author] nil, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] banana cream

Comments 7

fachefaucheux May 13 2015, 15:48:22 UTC

I thought this piece turned out quite nice! The characters are developing well--already I wonder if either of their mindsets are going to change, and how that'll come about. It also made me sorta nostalgic for arcades...

(Feel better, btw! I know that feeling all too well, and it suuuuuuucks. T_____T)

allseeingusagi May 13 2015, 23:21:13 UTC

You're so nice! Thank you always for your comments.
I do have some ideas on their developments, heheheh.
Getting excited to write about it too.

( Thank you so much! Just gotta keep moving forward. )

lost_spook May 15 2015, 07:54:20 UTC

I'd agree - this is pretty lively and the characters are developing in interesting ways! :-)

allseeingusagi May 15 2015, 14:18:48 UTC

Aaah, thank you so much! I'm glad you guys are enjoying them.

ruhgeenuh May 19 2015, 02:06:19 UTC

Was a huge fan of this one! Had me laughing a bit like a moron at my computer at some points. All in all, loved the interaction between the two of them~ As always, looking forward to the next part! ^^

allseeingusagi May 19 2015, 18:34:35 UTC

Ayyy, look at you!
I'm glad that you liked it so much, keheheh.
I'll hopefully impress with my next ones!

typeroftales June 5 2015, 23:49:04 UTC

I like that your guy counters expectations by not leaping in and getting physical just because it's the obvious choice. Good relationships make you think, and your heroine seemingly just got a whole lot to think about.