Candy Apple #5 (hand)
Marshmallow #8 (exploring)
Rocky Road #9 (basement)
Pistachio #9 (picnic)
Toppings:
Whipped Cream
Hot Fudge
Rating: PG-13
Story: Untilted
Character: Olivia Bailey//White
Hi guys! I'm really excited to make my first post here in RaTs. I'm not going to bore everyone with a lot of details but basically I'm using this group to "
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Administrative note, however: each piece can only use three prompts. So you'll have to take one of the four flavor prompts away and use it on another piece.
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Seconding Olram on the need for paragraph breaks. Your sentences flow just fine as if they were there, so it's really just a formatting/presentation issue.
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Did the cut work on the friend's feed? It isn't showing up when I'm viewing it.
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Going to echo about the use of paragraphs breaks and you may want to choose a different color for you notes than the blue one. It's hard to read on the white background of RaTs.
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I'll try and keep the paragraphs in mind. They've never been my strong suit.
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