Comments | runaway_tales: Vanilla Sundae with Whipped Cream-21

bitty1721 in runaway_tales

Vanilla Sundae with Whipped Cream-21

Dec 31, 2014 13:12

Author: Bitz
Title: Breaking Point
Rating:Teen
Vanilla #22. gossip
Topping/Extra: Whipped Cream
Story: Hearts on Fire Series
Summary: The reason of Phoenix's aversion to men.
Characters: Phoenix, Michaela, Curtis
Word Count: 469

( He always meets me for lunch... )

[topping] whipped cream, [author] bitz, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 3

amatalefay January 2 2015, 22:41:27 UTC

Whoa. Ouch. If that happened to me, I wouldn't like men so much either. Yikes.

Good job with this. It really made me feel the pain while still keeping a casual and authentic voice.

bitty1721 January 7 2015, 21:05:03 UTC

Yeah, Curtis was quite the ass then and again when he saw her again. Thank you for reading!

lost_spook January 19 2015, 08:32:49 UTC

*agrees with the above comment a lot* :-)