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Chilled (Pumpkin Pie, Cheeseburger, CCM + Root Beer Float)

Oct 27, 2014 17:22

‘Verse: ☼ The Sun, Radiant ☼
Challenges/Toppings/Extras: Pumpkin Pie #1 (ghost/ghost story), Cheeseburger #10 (srsly), Chocolate Chip Mint #11 (translucent) + Root Beer Float (script)
Rating: PG-13 (death)
Title: Chilled
Summary: A moonlit night invites stories, both fact and fiction.
Notes: Still not 100% happy with this, but NaNo approaches and I ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [extra] root beer float, [challenge] chocolate chip mint, [author] likelolwhat, [challenge] cheeseburger, [challenge] pumpkin pie

Comments 3

ebullientstars November 3 2014, 07:49:01 UTC

Love it! It reads like a true myth - I found myself completely gripped.

rustydragonfly December 17 2014, 19:27:37 UTC

Hey, Susanna is right, it can't just end there! But I think Matthew is right too, if the story isn't done, then you start to wonder if you might get involved in the end.

ichthusfish February 19 2015, 01:35:40 UTC

Nicely done. Very engaging tale, and I like the bantering between them. Hopefully it will keep them warm and awake a while :)