Comments | runaway_tales: Vanilla #19, with pocky.

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Vanilla #19, with pocky.

Jul 05, 2014 10:07

Author: Rainechan.
Rating: PG.
Challenge: Vanilla #19 - Games/Sports.
Extras/Toppings: Pocky.
Word Count: 100 words.
Genre: Urban Fantasy.
Story: Elementals (My NaNoWriMo 2013 novel).
Summary: Mosaruun updates Idurien on his trip to Mongolia over a game of Backgammon.
Notes: Because Mosaruun CAN get away with passing as a tourist. XD

( I’ll join in on their expedition as a tourist. )

[extra] pocky, [author] rainechan, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 6

elizabethtess July 6 2014, 01:21:33 UTC

Very interesting! The way these two act around each other seems to balance familiarity with formality in a very interesting way -- they seem to know each other well, but in this piece at least they communicate in a fairly professional and serious way. Very well done!

rainechan July 8 2014, 14:08:47 UTC

Mosaruun is laid back and aloof, while Idurien is very proper. They've been friends for longer than they can remember, but Idurien is still Mosaruun's leader, so there has to be at least a bit of professionalism. ;)

Thanks!

promisesesimorp July 7 2014, 00:58:40 UTC

Oh dang, Mosaruun isn't beating around the bush. Let's hear about those nightmares, Idurien!

rainechan July 8 2014, 14:06:10 UTC

XD

It's one thing for Idurien to be lost in the past while he's awake... It's another entirely while he's sleeping. Mosaruun walked in on those nightmares.

Lets see if Idurien will spit it out.

sirwynai August 9 2014, 02:48:35 UTC

This is a fun little piece. :D Would like to see him as a tourist.

rainechan January 10 2015, 19:39:19 UTC

Sorry for the late reply!

Mosaruun isn't Iranian like Idurien, so he can easily get away with passing as a tourist. XD