FotD, Chocolate #9, Bubble Gum #25

May 11, 2014 23:48


Author: Saya
Universe: The Shadows Within
Rating: Everyone
Flavor: Flavor of the Day: matrifocal (focused or centered on the mother; of, pertaining to, or designating a family unit or structure headed by the mother and lacking a father permanently or for extended periods), Chocolate #9 (resentment), Bubble Gum #25 (debt)
Toppings/Extras: N/A
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[author] saya, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] bubble gum, [challenge] flavor of the day

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lauriempress May 12 2014, 23:22:14 UTC
Interesting.

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blackflamingo77 May 18 2014, 06:43:17 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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amatalefay May 15 2014, 23:06:15 UTC
"As if she could say no" from the latest Pocky takes on a new meaning... ah, the strange experience of reading a canon backwards. Very intriguing!

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blackflamingo77 May 18 2014, 06:54:43 UTC
Reading things backwards does tend to result in a lot of "oh! that's what that meant!" and confused eyebrow cocking. I'm glad it's making sense anyway. Thanks for reading!

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rustydragonfly May 20 2014, 17:57:09 UTC
Well damn, that's creepy, though I figured Aiay was the host. Did her father know she would be in the event of his death, or was that an oversight on everyone's behalf?

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blackflamingo77 May 26 2014, 06:26:11 UTC
Yup, the creepiness has been everywhere lately.

As to whether or not her father knew, I'm not entirely sure myself. I'm a pantser through and through, so I probably won't know until it's directly relevant. I'm leaning towards yes.

Thanks for reading!

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