Comments | runaway_tales: Chocolate Chili 14; Prune 21

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Chocolate Chili 14; Prune 21

Dec 11, 2013 21:57

Author: Marina
Story: The Worldwalkers (aka The Story Formerly Known as The Dragon World)
Challenges: Chocolate Chili 14 (weariness), Prune 21 (the wisest mind has something yet to learn)
Toppings/Extras: Caramel (Carrie’s eldest is an adult)
Word Count: 1,332
Rating: PG (injury caused by a gunshot, swearing)
Summary: Kaylee didn’t want it to end ( Read more... )

[author] marina, [topping] caramel, [challenge] prune, [challenge] chocolate chili

Comments 7

hi_falootin December 12 2013, 06:28:09 UTC

I've decided I like Kaylee already and want to see where her story is going! Her feelings come across as very realistic and I enjoyed her dialogue with Howard.

smoothiegarten December 15 2013, 22:53:35 UTC

Thank you! I always have fun with her and there will probably be a lot of her and her sisters for the next while. :D

nathskywalker December 12 2013, 12:44:35 UTC

I wonder how Kaylee will settle into civilian life given that she really didn't want to be discharged.

smoothiegarten December 15 2013, 22:54:08 UTC

She'll get a project, but it will be frustrating at first. Thank you!

shayna611 December 15 2013, 02:10:22 UTC

Ditto what Falootin said. I would like to see ore of Kaylee. Good to have you back! :)

smoothiegarten December 15 2013, 22:54:36 UTC

You will most likely get your wish :D Thank you! Good to be writing.

niee87 December 20 2013, 20:42:20 UTC

Oh Kay! At least your sisters have plans to occupy your time :P Also, I still adore Howard :D