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meepalicious in runaway_tales

poached pear 3

Oct 13, 2013 11:26

author: Frances J./Meep
title: Tender Loving Care
verse: Jazz Remix
prompt: poached pear #3: sick & tired (+ gummy bunnies: writerverse Monthly/Mini Prompt Table ("unfit for duty"))
word count: 1274
rating: G
summary: Mariel gets sick, and Aya takes care of her.

( 'Are you feeling quite the thing? Sit down, love.' )

[challenge] poached pear, [topping] gummy bunnies, [author] meepalicious

Comments 4

ichthusfish October 14 2013, 03:21:24 UTC

Aww! That was really sweet! Aya is a very determined lady when she wants to be and Nikos seems to be a good man. Nicely done :)

shake_the_stars October 15 2013, 03:41:34 UTC

I've been following along and lax about commenting, but I've really been enjoying these so far. Mariel and Aya are a cute couple (and the Typhoid Mary reference at the end made me snicker).

meepalicious October 16 2013, 11:48:57 UTC

This is really heartening to hear. I've been a little frustrated lately with the amount of feedback I've been getting (not here, but just … in general) so I'm glad to know someone is even reading this!

shake_the_stars October 16 2013, 19:48:14 UTC

I can identify! I know what I write isn't to all tastes, because I will always become obsessed with the weirdest and most arcane thing available and then write about it, so that part doesn't upset me. It'd just be nice to hear from the two or three people who like it ;) (But at the same time, I don't want to be the middle-schooler on the Pit of Voles shouting R&R PLZ!!!.)

Will comment on your latest offering when I am not at work and thus restricted to my phone.