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Peach #2

Aug 23, 2012 20:09

Author: Faeiri
Challenge: Peach #2 (the moment you've been waiting for)
Extras: none
Word Count: 111
Rating: G
Notes: So I disappeared for nearly six months...hopefully I can do a little bit better this time. Also, new canon, so this is just a mental preview of what could possibly happen.

( The sea flickered with the fading sun... )

[challenge] peach

Comments 3

amatalefay August 24 2012, 16:55:18 UTC

This was gorgeous. Even though it was short--or maybe because of it--I could definitely get a sense of Aria's character and the world that you're building. Great job conveying so much in only 111 words. I would definitely love to read more of your work.

ichthusfish August 25 2012, 01:38:43 UTC

Hi! Welcome back :)

Very nice use of imagery. It makes me wonder what Aria was actually expecting of the ocean, if the reality of it doesn't match up. Nicely done :)

faeiri August 26 2012, 02:54:40 UTC

Hi, and thanks! :D I haven't posted writing anywhere in awhile, but I think I'm getting back into it now.