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Cola 21, Star Fruit 25

Aug 11, 2012 21:20

Author: Marina
Story: The Dragon World
Challenge: Cola 21 (kid tested, mother approved - My Treat: [Caramel] there’s something different about you kids lately), Star Fruit 25 (my best wasn’t good enough)
Toppings/Extras: Caramel
Word Count: 662
Rating: PG
Summary: Anna Mitchell’s eyes and ears are sharper than Laura was hoping.
Notes: For today’s ( Read more... )

[author] marina, [challenge] star fruit, [topping] caramel, [challenge] cola

Comments 2

ichthusfish August 13 2012, 03:10:05 UTC

Aww, poor Laura, stuck in the middle of everybody. A little surprised that their parents were aware of the panic attacks for so long before Anna tried reaching out to Laura. I understand them not wanting to push Chase, but still...

Nicely written :)

smoothiegarten August 17 2012, 21:00:33 UTC

It hasn't been that long since they got back. A couple weeks at the very most, I think. Also, part of it is that I'm pretty sure Laura's been deliberately avoiding discussing any of this and bailing at any sign that a discussion might go this direction. So I don't think it's that they weren't trying. IDK, this is a difficult time period for all of them and hard to think and write about. :( Thank you!