Comments | runaway_tales: Fond Memories (Coffee #9, TrailMix #15, Green Tea #29 + Caramel)

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Fond Memories (Coffee #9, TrailMix #15, Green Tea #29 + Caramel)

Jul 07, 2012 00:03

Author: Nicole_n
Title: Fond Memories
Rating: G
Challenge/Extras:Green Tea #29 (What took you so long?), Trail Mix #15 (market), Coffee #9 (Journal) + Caramel
Word Count: 590
Story Arc: Loves Complications
Summary: Julia waits for AJ and ends up finding something that brings back memories.

AN: I'd love construcitve criticism as always. These characters ( Read more... )

[topping] caramel, [challenge] green tea, [challenge] trail mix, [challenge] coffee

Comments 3

ichthusfish July 7 2012, 02:18:58 UTC

Ah, it sounds like they're having the same weather we're having here right now. It's a bit crazy like that. Interesting the emotions that come with finding and buying the diary. I wonder where that will develop now. Nicely done :)

nightshade2012 July 7 2012, 03:44:54 UTC

I enjoyed this. I liked how the memories of the past were mingled with her present and how she seems to value both equally.

nicole_n1990 July 7 2012, 14:50:47 UTC

Thanks guys.

@ichthusfish: I needed to give her a reason to go inside and as I was staring out of the window this happened so I figured it would work.

@nightshade2012: It wasn't originally going to be set in the future but that's just how it developed. It's weird how our brains work sometimes.