Comments | runaway_tales: PawPaw#1, Vanilla Custard #11 + butterscotch + gummy bunnies + pineapple + peaches

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PawPaw#1, Vanilla Custard #11 + butterscotch + gummy bunnies + pineapple + peaches

Jul 06, 2012 10:48

Story: The Age of Heroes
Title: Happy New Year
Prompts: PawPaw #1: This is only the beginning, Red Hot Cinnamon #6: where there's smoke, Vanilla Custard #11: Sad, really, isn't it? People spend all their time making nice things, and other people come along and break them. + butterscotch + gummy bunnies (500themes #9: sensation of loss) + fresh peaches (You ( Read more... )

[topping] gummy bunnies, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [topping] butterscotch, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [challenge] vanilla custard, [challenge] red hot cinnamon, [inactive-author] kaitygirl, [challenge] pawpaw

Comments 4

ichthusfish July 7 2012, 02:31:15 UTC

Wow! Poor Crow! To be a seer and not be able to do anything about what you're seeing :( I can understand her feelings of helplessness here. Very nicely written, interesting piece :)

kaitygirl88 July 8 2012, 20:24:36 UTC

Crow is very much a manipulator and schemer. It's killing her to know that she could prevent this huge catastrophe but being unable to do so. Thanks for reading!

niee87 July 8 2012, 19:57:07 UTC

Color me intrigued! I love the format you used for this and it worked really well to form a full picture, once I got the format down. I agree with Ichthus! Poor Crow! That has to be the worst situation. The last sentence really intrigued me and made parts of your other piece in this universe potentially make a lot more sense :P

kaitygirl88 July 8 2012, 20:26:10 UTC

Thanks! This format is basically Crow's mind: it's constantly skipping around through the time stream then flitting back to the present before going off in another direction. She's very powerful, which makes this feeling of impotence all the more terrible for her!