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nothingtoregret in runaway_tales

Buttercream #9; Vanilla #25

Jun 30, 2012 00:33

Author: Regret
Rating: 15
Story: Radial: Unravel
Challenge: Buttercream #9 - Basket; Vanilla #25 - Changing Seasons
Word Count: 971
Summary: Milos sets out on his delivery.

( The package weighed more heavily in his satchel than he liked-as much with the responsibility it carried as in pounds and ounces. He rested a gloved hand on it as he strode down the street, fingers tapping restlessly on the leather every few minutes. He’d been right enough, sure: it was something Robin didn’t want the others to know about. He was starting to wish he didn’t know either. )

[challenge] buttercream, [author] regret, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 2

ichthusfish June 30 2012, 03:31:59 UTC

Uh-oh! Very nicely written. Love all the detailing again. The cliffhanger is in just the perfect place. I'm hoping now that Robin hasn't been part of setting Milo up, and that his client is just a coincidence. Set-up doesn't seem quite Robin's style. Also wondering about the guy 'reading a book'. Nice :)

nothingtoregret July 2 2012, 14:48:25 UTC

Aaaah all will become clear... well, hopefully, and at some point...! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, I just need to stop editing these pieces (although they've all needed it - and all been done twice before too...) and work on the one I'm on now. :s