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Buttercream #14; Vanilla #8; Papaya #24

Jun 28, 2012 08:39

Author: Regret
Rating: 15
Story: Radial: Unravel
Challenge: Buttercream #14 - Robins; Vanilla #8 - My Mentor/Idol/Hero; Papaya #24 - What's The Catch?
Word Count: 2,626
Summary: Milos faces his employer over the previous night's events; it goes even less well than he expected.

( The dawn chorus was chirping tunelessly as Milos inhaled deeply, pressed his palm to the door and tried to make it open without alerting everyone in the building to the fact. )

[challenge] buttercream, [author] regret, [challenge] papaya, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 2

ichthusfish June 28 2012, 23:52:06 UTC

So that sounds like a slightly ominous way to earn trust back. I like all of Milo's little observations scattered through this. I think I really like this character quite a bit. Robin is a total BAMF, and it's probably a good job he's not delivering to customers... they might be worse off than with Milo lol. Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

nothingtoregret June 29 2012, 19:47:34 UTC

Ahh, that's one way to put it. ;) Oddly, I never quite realised how hypocritical Robin is until you said that. He'd say he's not as short-tempered, but I think that'd be a lie... :p