flavour of the day, grapefruit and strawberry shortcake with malt and fresh peaches

May 19, 2012 16:15


Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Postdetermined
Rating: G
Challenge: FOTD: phatic, Grapefruit #8: in stone, Strawberry Shortcake #25: little april showers
Toppings/Extras: fresh peaches, malt
Wordcount: 543
Summary: It’s time for the Black Ops team to go home. Nearly.
Notes: My word, another FotD. Post-Timeless, just about! Phatic: denoting ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [challenge] grapefruit, [inactive-author] ninablues, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [challenge] strawberry shortcake, [challenge] flavor of the day

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roisin_farrell May 19 2012, 17:49:24 UTC
Okay, the thought of Jacob with a machine gun is a very scary thought indeed. Glad Lidia stopped him. I laughed at Ashdown taking toothpaste because that is a very Ashdown thing to do.

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ninablues May 29 2012, 16:40:11 UTC
Jacob stole a whole bunch of stuff from the future, but machine guns was a throw too far. XD

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ninablues May 29 2012, 16:40:31 UTC
That makes sense, actually. I'm sure Ashdown snaffled all manner of toiletries. XD Thanks!

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hi_falootin May 20 2012, 04:14:46 UTC
whoo, you found a good use for that rubber ducky! it's pretty easy to imagine Ashdown with that and the toothpaste now that I'm thinking about it. "Hence the multiple selves and the demon dimensions. But we got it right in the end" made me grin. Hey, sounds like a blast ;)

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ninablues May 29 2012, 16:41:07 UTC
The rubber duck prompt had me soooo stumped, I remember just staring at that entire set of prompts in utter bafflement. XD I'm glad to have it out of the way... and that it somehow turned out all right!

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rustydragonfly May 20 2012, 17:15:05 UTC
It miiiight mess up the timeline, but only in a sort of toothpastey and rubber ducky sort of way. Not sure what effect that would have on history though.

(also a belated hello and welcome back and how awesome it is to see you!)

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ninablues May 29 2012, 16:41:55 UTC
Hello to you too! Glad to be back and writing again, and thanks for the kind words. :D

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ichthusfish May 21 2012, 02:11:22 UTC
Multiple timelines are still a mind twist, but I'm glad they got there in the end. It seems like a nice, peaceful moment for the team somehow. Te rubber ducky and the toothpaste was much fun :)

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ninablues May 29 2012, 16:42:13 UTC
Definitely a wind-down after the main story concludes. They needed it. XD

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