grapefruit 30 (I'm finally posting something~)

May 11, 2012 18:55

grapefruit 30. end of the tunnel + malt: Rayn : message in a bottle (BTS hat)
story: second chances ; late high-school. wordcount: 2605. rating: pg.

notes: So like a million years ago I wrote this short, dopey piece about Rayn giving Mike a mystery letter and then never followed up even though I said I would. Shayna reminded me I'd yet to ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [challenge] grapefruit, [author] falootin

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shayna611 May 12 2012, 04:03:14 UTC
Bah, if they got their acts together they wouldn't be half as interesting!

This is all awesome - Mike being his usual Eeyore self about it all, and poor, clueless Darcy. And yeah, I'm not sure Rayn really gets any points at all, since he waited for it to be "too late to matter" to say it. Oh, and the Levee bit was great ;)

Of course, now what I want to know is what happened when they showed up in Wyoming. I mean, I've got decent clues, I can get the gist, but come on, that's got to be some serious awkwardness and mess (I'm awful, aren't I?)

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hi_falootin May 12 2012, 04:08:06 UTC
Yay, I'm glad you liked it since you'd asked about it! :D Thanks!

I keep psyching myself out about the rodeo because like you predicted, there is serious awkwardness and it's been a little intimidating to write. But I think I promised I would do it this year so...I'm gonna try my best to write it! And no, you're not awful, I like that part too XD

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shayna611 May 12 2012, 04:32:16 UTC
I can definitely see where it would get intimidating

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roisin_farrell May 13 2012, 02:48:16 UTC
Jones Soda! I knew what they were talking about before I even clicked on the link. It's a decidedly NW thing. (Fufu Berry is still my favorite).

And aww Mike. Yeah, bad timing but Rayn was right that Mike sells himself short. I know it's a tough thing to stop doing but hopefully Mike can do it.

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hi_scribbler May 15 2012, 06:52:00 UTC
Yeah, I just had a Fufu Berry soda yesterday! Totally delicious :D

and I think that's Mike's end goal in a way, even if he doesn't realize it yet! Eventually I'll get to the part when he gets things bit more sorted out. Thanks for reading!

eta sorry for consistently replying to you with my writing journal @_@ I'm working on my archive

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theoryoferin May 17 2012, 16:30:08 UTC
pfft, the green apple jones is my favorite! crazy saying they're only left with the worst flavors. :P

i want to cuddle mike in this. poor thing. though, i can't imagine rayn is feeling much better / more in control at this point either, really.

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hi_falootin May 19 2012, 02:49:42 UTC
I think Darcy might prefer the teeth-rottingly sweet flavors...dunno, just seems like her XD But yeah, this was a bit of an "oooof" piece. thanks for reading! ♥

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