Cookies n' Cream #23, Fudge Ripple #4, Pocky, Cookies n' Cream #14, FOTM Sea Salt #2

[lunafeather]

Author: Lunafeather
Story: Meld
Title: Lost to the Darkness
Challenge: Cookies n' Cream #23: Break, Fudge Ripple #4: Despair
Toppings/Extras: Pocky
Word Count: 100
Characters: Bastien D'Elvar, Orielle Panaya
Rating: PG
Summary: He loses her to Neht.
Author's Note: This is my first post here. I'm excited to share my story with all of you! I would like to be

Comments

[ichthusfish]

Welcome to RATs! :D

These were both very nicely written. I got a nice sense of your characters and how to meshed with each other. The first piece was especially powerful, the second quite creepy. Sounds like an long and interesting road to come :)

[lunafeather]

Thank you very much!

I haven't written much of the two of them together, but I have a set plan in my head for them to be very close, and very just....right. I hope that I can get it right myself ^_^

[bitty1721]

Welcome! Both of these pieces are very intriguing. I can't wait to see more of the storyline.

[lunafeather]

Thank you! More is on the way, although writer's block has appeared out of nowhere =[