Comments | runaway_tales: PawPaw #2, Vanilla Custard #29, Sea Salt #6 + gummy bunnies

kaitygirl88 in runaway_tales

PawPaw #2, Vanilla Custard #29, Sea Salt #6 + gummy bunnies

Apr 21, 2012 12:06

Story: Blaze Mafia Family
Title: Pretty
Prompts: PawPaw #2: the son/daughter I never had, Vanilla Custard #29: Not everything comes back out of the dark, Sea Salt #6: trickle + gummy bunnies (500themes #41: and it is beautiful)
Rating: Hard R for murder, blood, serious screwed up child
Words: 533
Characters: Gemma Wade, Soul Wade, Felix Wade
Summary: It should ( Read more... )

[challenge] vanilla custard, [inactive-author] kaitygirl, [topping] gummy bunnies, [challenge] sea salt, [challenge] pawpaw

Comments 9

rustydragonfly April 21 2012, 17:52:12 UTC

Whoa, Gemma is so messed up. And Soul STILL manages to be oddly endearing despite being... well, Soul.

Purple egg please?

kaitygirl88 April 22 2012, 16:06:50 UTC

It's Soul's curse in life to be eternally cute, even when he's scary as hell and leading small children down the same path. XD Thanks for reading!

Your prompt: "I asked God for a bike but I know God doesn't work that way. So I stole a bike and asked for forgiveness."

roisin_farrell April 21 2012, 18:04:44 UTC

Ah yup. She's so like both of them. I wonder how Firebird reacts to this. Hmmm.

Red egg please?

kaitygirl88 April 22 2012, 16:08:06 UTC

It's a complicated Family affair, to say the least. I'm writing a binge about it right now. Thanks for reading!

Your prompt: "We never really grow up, we only learn how to act in public."

nathskywalker April 22 2012, 14:02:36 UTC

okay, that's seriously fucked up. And I want to know what happens next.

kaitygirl88 April 22 2012, 16:08:59 UTC

Gemma's entrance into the Family is crazy. Just like her! XD I'm writing a binge about all the drama right now. Thanks for reading.

ardentblue April 22 2012, 14:54:14 UTC

Screwed up it may be but I love how you've written the bits from Gemma's perspective - look forward to reading more.

kaitygirl88 April 22 2012, 16:10:08 UTC

Gemma is definitely an interesting character to try and get a feeling for. She's so crazy, but she's still a child. Thanks for reading.

ichthusfish April 23 2012, 16:54:54 UTC

Whoa! That's one heck of a way to meet new people... Something tells me that Soul's observations at the end are correct. There's an undercurrent to this that seems to suggest the way Gemma grows up isn't all down to her adoptive family's influence. It works especially well that it's from her pov. Nicely written :)