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[luna_moonsilver]

Story: Ice Cream Truck
Flavour: Prune #18 [no peace for the wicked]
Extra: Malt - Summer 2011 #486 ["I once saved your life. Now I need you to save mine."]
Word count: 2,787 [669 added]

Again, not too sure where this is going... I wasn't entirely sure how to format this either, because the piece I'm adding happens before everything else, but I've just

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[shayna611]

YAY! I love what you did with it. I think it's actually really interesting that you tacked on a beginning at the end (I used the format I did because I figured people could add anywhere that way) but it works, because it's like this cool twist where it's about the kids all along and then it goes back to Corbin and what came before. And I love that you tied him and the priestess together in it, that's not a path that had occurred to me at all.

I really hope these both keep going, and I'd like to see some new ones start too, this is fun!

[luna_moonsilver]

Thanks! :D I would have put it on the front if I'd thought about it, but in hindsight it probably works better at the end there. And yay, that relationship only occurred to me as I was writing it so I'm glad you like it!

I hope so too, this was an awesome idea. :)

[hi_falootin]

ooh, you did like a prologue! great scene-love the interaction between Corbin and the priestess.

these are super fun, I'll have to add something to this one :)

[luna_moonsilver]

Thanks! It was all that really came up - I have a feeling that anything I wrote involving the kids would have just been far too vague.

They definitely are; I'm really enjoying myself with them at the moment :D.