Comments | runaway_tales: FOTD, Eggnog 10: Epiphany

bookblather in runaway_tales

FOTD, Eggnog 10: Epiphany

Dec 20, 2011 22:37

Title: Epiphany
Main Story: In the Heart -- The Caramel Project
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: FOTD (lucent: shining), eggnog 10 (grab bag/Secret Santa), cookie crumbs ( The Christmas Horse), malt (BTS 5 : Felipe : I'm in love with a girl I hate -- she enjoys pointing out, every bad thing about me.), fresh peaches (There's increased emotional tension ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [topping] cookie crumbs, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] eggnog, [challenge] flavor of the day

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bookblather December 23 2011, 04:34:41 UTC

She's touched for some other outside reasons, but yes, I agree that they're adorable. :D

Thanks!

kay_brooke December 22 2011, 15:41:07 UTC

Oh, what a lovely scene. The interaction between Summer and Zack is so awkward, but it helps to lay the foundation of their future so well, it's amazing.

bookblather December 23 2011, 04:35:07 UTC

Thank you so much! <3

lady_macbeth_19 December 22 2011, 22:58:55 UTC

I love the triangulation in the scene, especially since it foreshadows their future romantic endeavours ;) I also like how you've captured Zack's tone. Its well written, gruff and yet still likeable.
XxLil

bookblather December 23 2011, 04:35:41 UTC

Thank you very much! I tried to balance their interactions, so it's glad to see it worked.