Margarita 24: Clarity

Dec 14, 2011 23:51

Title: Clarity
Main Story: In The Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Margarita 24 (reject), My Treat (My heart is weak and unreliable. When I go it will be my heart. I try to burden it as little as possible.), malt (Challenge: I remember the day when ______happened.), butterscotch (Frank is ten), rainbow sprinkles (Frank), hot fudge (Danny's father ( Read more... )

[challenge] margarita, [topping] sprinkles, [extra] malt, [topping] butterscotch, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather

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bookblather December 18 2011, 04:11:57 UTC
Yeah, he really has. He wasn't kidding about trying never to care again.

Thank you.

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kay_brooke December 15 2011, 19:39:37 UTC
It's so sad that Karol never got over that early trauma in his life, so much that it affects more than one generation of his family afterward. It's even sadder that he sees it as saving his family from being hurt.

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bookblather December 18 2011, 04:12:18 UTC
He really does see it as saving them, especially Frank, when actually what he does is doom his grandchildren.

Thank you!

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leiamoody December 15 2011, 22:15:48 UTC
Ah, the hurt that keeps on giving...very realistic scenario here between Karl and Frank.

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bookblather December 18 2011, 04:12:37 UTC
Basically. Thank you!

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ichthusfish December 16 2011, 02:03:49 UTC
... just... That's really quite shocking actualy. I'm not sure what else to say. Nicely written, as always. It works well from the old-too-soon child POV :)

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bookblather December 18 2011, 04:12:47 UTC
Thank you very much!

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