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FOTD: Control

Dec 13, 2011 21:58

Title: Control
Main Story: In The HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: FOTD (cortage: a procession, especially a ceremonial one), malt (Challenge: What were things like for the parents when they were kids?), butterscotch (Rebecca's about ten), rainbow sprinkles (Danny's mother), pocky, hot fudge (Danny's mother ( Read more... )

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bookblather December 18 2011, 04:13:19 UTC

Miranda Templeton! That's her mother's name. And it isn't... dangerous, exactly, just very smothering.

Thank you!

ichthusfish December 14 2011, 05:02:58 UTC

Ugh... this sort of thing does tend to rub off on kids so much, even though they all say it never will. I'm sure her mother looks really good faffing about in the middle of the street like that *rolleyes* :( Nicely done :)

bookblather December 18 2011, 04:13:39 UTC

It really does. And her mother is... um. Well, she's... yeah.

Thank you!

lady_macbeth_19 December 14 2011, 22:40:01 UTC

I really like how you used the FOTD and this passage just chose how much parents affect children....
XxLil

bookblather December 18 2011, 04:14:10 UTC

They really do, even when they don't mean to. Thank you!

leiamoody December 15 2011, 23:05:50 UTC

Perfect child=perfect perceptions in the eyes of others, at least according to Rebecca's mother. Of course Le Mama is an idiot, but you couldn't tell her otherwise. :|

Expertly written as usual.

bookblather December 18 2011, 04:14:38 UTC

Seriously. And it must be said that Rebecca doesn't do exactly this... but she does need to have that serious control.

Thank you so much!