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Eggnog 5, Margarita 22: Ringing Out

Dec 08, 2011 22:09

Title: Ringing Out
Main Story: In The Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Eggnog 5 (silver bells), margarita 22 (gain), My Treat (Olivia loses herself in the music.), malt (SC 9: How can a bird that is born for joy sit in a cage and sing?), whipped cream (she's thirteen and fifteen in the first two), pocky chain, fresh pineapple (Morning, Mr. Magpie, ( Read more... )

[challenge] margarita, [extra] malt, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] pocky chain, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [challenge] eggnog

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bookblather December 11 2011, 07:17:02 UTC

Comes with having played three of the four myself, I think. I just thought about how it felt to play it. And yeah... this is me and writing and depression.

Thank you!

leiamoody December 10 2011, 07:42:57 UTC

That feeling of finding some creative spark within yourself is perfectly conveyed in Olivia's struggle. Beautiful piece.

bookblather December 11 2011, 07:17:08 UTC

Thank you!

originalpuck December 10 2011, 10:31:25 UTC

This is really beautiful. The details, the sorrow at losing her one escape, and her relief at getting it back really pulled me into her emotional journey. I really loved this.

bookblather December 11 2011, 07:17:30 UTC

I think escape is a necessary part of everybody's life, and for Olivia to lose her one outlet is devastating. Thank you.