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Passionfruit 9: Stories

Nov 19, 2011 00:47

Title: Stories
Main Story: In the Heart -- EPIC PIRATE AUFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Passionfruit 9 (Bright is the ring of words When the right man rings them - Robert Lewis Stevenson), hot fudge (Yvonne), pocky, malt (malt challenge: childhood), chopped nuts (EPIC PIRATE AU), butterscotch (can a butterscotch AU have butterscotch?), fresh ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [topping] butterscotch, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] passionfruit, [extra] pocky, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries

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bookblather November 25 2011, 05:20:32 UTC

It really does. She winds up believing that she deserves this, and ruining herself to get it.

Thank you!

sarcasticsra November 19 2011, 22:32:25 UTC

Oh, Yvonne's father. So well-meaning.

Though Yvonne is a bit more sympathetic in this AU, IIRC.

Good job!

bookblather November 25 2011, 05:21:03 UTC

She is, because so much of what happened to her wasn't her fault. And she isn't, because some of what is her fault is almost worse.

Thank you!

ichthusfish November 21 2011, 03:23:46 UTC

Heh... the way parents accidently set their kids up for life. Very nicely done :)

bookblather November 25 2011, 05:21:25 UTC

Yup. The littlest things can have the biggest effects.

Thank you!