Comments | runaway_tales: Cheeseburger 3, Passionfruit 22, Sea Salt 2: Time

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Cheeseburger 3, Passionfruit 22, Sea Salt 2: Time

Nov 14, 2011 18:54

Title: Time
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Cheeseburger 3 (oh noes), passionfruit 22 (Time is the fire in which we burn - Delmore Schwartz), sea salt 2 (river/stream) hot fudge (Farid), pocky, malt (SC 122: I had everything I ever wanted and I let it go. For you.), fresh pineapple (Something filled up/My heart with nothing/ ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [extra] malt, [challenge] sea salt, [topping] butterscotch, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [challenge] passionfruit, [extra] pocky, [topping] cherry, [challenge] cheeseburger

Comments 5

sarcasticsra November 15 2011, 00:16:30 UTC

Man. This whole thing is really just kind of heartbreaking all around. Beautifully written, too. Great work.

bookblather November 18 2011, 05:58:39 UTC

It's so hard on everyone. Thank you!

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bookblather November 18 2011, 05:59:14 UTC

Yeah. This one is all about the shortness of the piece, like the shortness of the time they had together. [/sleep-deprived poetry]

Thank you!

ichthusfish November 15 2011, 05:29:17 UTC

Somehow, he doesn't sound like he's too grateful :( He seems to be still trying to swim back. Very sad. Beautifully written :)

bookblather November 18 2011, 06:00:10 UTC

No, he misses her deeply. But he is grateful that at least she gave him his siblings.

Thank you!