Cheeseburger 13, Pomelo 25: Ephemeral

[bookblather]

Title: Ephemeral
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Cheeseburger 13 (tl;dr), pomelo 25 (A rolling stone gathers no moss), My Treat (Yvonne just can't seem to form attachments.), hot fudge (Yvonne), malt (SC 325: I was raised to be charming, not sincere. - Into the Woods, Prince Charming), pocky, rainbow sprinkles (Yvonne), fresh

Comments

[sarcasticsra]

...yeah, Yvonne, that's why they leave you. Not because you're EVIL or anything.

This is a good insight into her character, though! Well done.

[bookblather]

Yup. It's totally because she dares to ask for something for herself. Yeah.

Thank you!

[bookblather]

It's the greatest tragedy of her life, I think. In all honesty.

Thank you.

[toxic_fairie]

She is straight up evil. LOL. But hearing her own internal monologue, rationalizing what she does is quite interesting.

[bookblather]

Evil, maybe? Maybe more insane. Because she does have legitimate mental problems. But she does definitely do some evil stuff so. Yeah.

Thank you!

[ichthusfish]

*blinks* ... Yes, I can see why that wouldn't win her many male admirers. Men do tend to have brains for the most part; they can tell the fakers. I actually feel sorry for Yvonne in this one. Nice work :)

[bookblather]

No kidding. Oh, Yvonne. She just doesn't understand ANYONE who doesn't think like her, and since there's thankfully very few people who think like her...

Thank you.

[bookblather]

She's not real good at self-introspection.

Thank you.