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[luna_moonsilver]

Title: Training
Story: The Dragonfire Chronicles - Atarah's Freedom
Characters: Meir, Tahlia, Jair
Flavours: Cheeseburger #1 [pwnd]
Toppings: Caramel
Extras: N/A
Word count: 362
Rating: PG
Summary: In which Meir tries not to compare himself to his sister.
Notes: Not the first part of my NaNo caramel story, but a part; I do want to get through Cheeseburger

Comments

[ichthusfish]

It sounds like he is competeing a little bit, even if he won't admit it. But is there some external comparison / association going on as well, maybe? From Jair's perspective? It made me wonder if that was why he'd chosen Meir to train him... Nicely done. Good luck with Cheeseburger :)

[luna_moonsilver]

Yeah, Meir never admits it even though it's fairly obvious to everyone else. And hm, yes, probably a little - though I think there's a bit of hero worship going on too ;D.

Thank you! :D

[luna_moonsilver]

That certainly plays a part in Meir's entire character - and it's not just his sister he spends time comparing himself to.

Thank you :D I was very excited when I realised I'd done that many!

[bookblather]

Awww. I like that he's so determinedly not looking at her but is clearly so aware of everything she's doing. I feel bad for the poor kid who's his student. Good job.

[luna_moonsilver]

Haha, yeah, poor Jair is getting the brunt of Meir's frustrations! Maybe he'll pick someone else to train him, though...

Thank you :)