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kaitygirl88 in runaway_tales

Pumpkin Pie #2, FotD: billow + fresh peaches + gummy bunnies

Oct 03, 2011 17:39

Story: Trick or Treat
Title: I Can't
Prompts: Pumpkin Pie #2: witchcraft/supernatural, FotD: billow (to rise or roll in or like a great wave; surge) + fresh peaches (Some books that you find fascinating are changing your life in subtle ways.) + gummy bunnies (500themes #8: breathtaking reality)
Rating: PG13 for language
Words: 542
Characters: Gwyneth Tremayne, ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] kaitygirl, [topping] gummy bunnies, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [challenge] pumpkin pie, [challenge] flavor of the day

Comments 12

roisin_farrell October 3 2011, 22:51:55 UTC

Ooh, interesting. I so like Gwyn, with her no nonsense attitude and fierce loyalty. And ooh, talking dragons! Adrian sounds adorable.

Yum, bubblegum! *Reaches in a takes a blue one*

kaitygirl88 October 5 2011, 01:46:42 UTC

Thanks! Gwyn is the penultimate of hardasses when it comes to whipping Dani into line, but she does have legitimate reasons.

Your prompt:

"It's ridiculously dangerous. It's like a danger cupcake with murder icing." Hardison from Leverage

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kaitygirl88 October 5 2011, 01:52:54 UTC

I've never tried to write NaNo on the fly. It's a tantalizing thought but I just don't know how to go about it!

Dani definitely gets in over her head because she knows how magic is Supposed to be but Gwyn is just not cooperating! XD

Your prompt: "I know a guy who knows a guy who knows a guy who knows a samurai." Nate from Leverage

toxic_fairie October 4 2011, 06:04:27 UTC

Harry Potter didn't have to run like this!

Love this line. SO. MUCH.

nathskywalker October 4 2011, 10:02:50 UTC

Me too. That was my favorite bit.

kaitygirl88 October 5 2011, 01:53:42 UTC

lol, Thanks! Yeah, they don't ever tell you where the gym is in Hogwarts, do they? XD

nathskywalker October 4 2011, 10:04:26 UTC

I'm probably doing Kennedy's story for NaNo.

I want to see more of Gwyn, Dani and Adrian. Dani struck me as sympathetic right away.

Candy?

kaitygirl88 October 5 2011, 01:56:32 UTC

Kennedy's story! That'll be great, I bet. The most obvious thing for me to do would be the Blazes but I just can't think of a plot line for them that can stretch 50000 words.

Dani comes into this story woefully naive but she's a good foil to Gwyn's excessive bitterness. And Adrian just cute fluff for the sake of cuteness. XD

Your prompt: "The plan is...to figure out the plan in the car." Nate from Leverage

kay_brooke October 4 2011, 17:14:54 UTC

Heh, I like Gwyn. I feel a little bad for Dani, but Gwyn is probably right to push her to her limits. She obviously cares about Dani enough to want to see her succeed.

kaitygirl88 October 5 2011, 02:05:32 UTC

Gwyn doesn't particularly like Dani but death is a real option in Gwyn's line of work so Gwyn will make her run up that damn mountain every day if she has to! XD Thanks for reading.