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A Fluffy Cloves Flavor Binge

Sep 30, 2011 14:53

Story: Blaze Mafia Family
Title: Paloma and Atlas in Luuurv
Prompts: Cloves Flavor Binge + brownie + gummy bunnies (500themes #3: flashes of euphoria) + malt (Summer Challenge #333: Don't know what you did boy but/ You had it and I've been hooked ever since/ I told my mother, my brother, my sister and my friend/ I told the other, my loves, both past and ( Read more... )

[challenge] cloves, [extra] malt, [inactive-author] kaitygirl, [extra] brownie, [topping] gummy bunnies, flavor binge

Comments 9

luna_moonsilver September 30 2011, 21:01:57 UTC

Aha, that last line! ♥ GOLD.

This whole thing is great though; it's good to see that Paloma and Atlas have their own little fluffy moments even when she worries about what he does for a job and has to meet Papa B and everything else... It's even more adorable than I expected, and they're obviously in love, which I think is the most important thing :D

kaitygirl88 October 3 2011, 22:48:45 UTC

These two definitely agree with you about love being the most important thing! They've got their fair share of problems but it's always better for them to face the problem together than apart. :) Thanks for reading!

lady_macbeth_19 September 30 2011, 21:12:12 UTC

Aw! Paloma and Atlas are so cute together! (and btw, I just quickly wanted to say I love almost all the names in this verse, including Paloma. The name isn't by any chance inspired by the English singer, is it? because if it is then we are definitely long lost best friends ;) ). I really like the way you incorperated the clove prompts to, since that is a hard flavour to make romantic. well done! (and I promise I will catch up on reading asap...)
XxLil

kaitygirl88 October 3 2011, 22:50:22 UTC

My long lost bestie! XD I had just found her album and was playing it on repeat when I came up with the idea for the Blazes so of course SOMEBODY was going to end up being named Paloma. Thanks for reading!

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kaitygirl88 October 3 2011, 22:51:10 UTC

Thank you! :D

bookblather October 1 2011, 04:23:57 UTC

At this point, you should be grateful that I woke you up first.

lol no she shouldn't. Asshole.

The rest of this is super fluffy and sweet, though; at least, as fluffy and sweet as these two ever get. Very nicely done.

kaitygirl88 October 3 2011, 22:52:38 UTC

Men bitch all the time about women nagging them but Paloma knows the truth. If we don't stay on top of them then they damn well will think we're grateful for just being woken up first! XDDD

Thanks for reading.

roisin_farrell October 1 2011, 18:15:20 UTC

Awesome binge! I love seeing this side of Atlas and Paloma and the more I see about her, the more I love her.

kaitygirl88 October 3 2011, 22:53:22 UTC

Paloma's pretty much awesome. I think I hesitated so long on focusing on her because I knew she would be awesome and I would regret killing her off so early in the timeline. XD Thanks for reading!